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« 04. August 2010, 11:51:47 »
this is what happened after the incident in the Tavern in Minus with Lady Red  .

Snapper went to Malcomb and Kati to tell them what had happened wanting them to hear it from her first .                                                                                                       

Snapper Hollak " looks up to Malcomb " have you happened to talk to Ashaka
Malcomb Danitz shakes hios head. Nope.
Snapper Hollak rubs her head where she had been knocked out , it still hurting " humm well , I was with Lady Red today on the Docks in minus we were just standing their talking when we saw all these little bug things crawling all over the place , and well we went to stomping them and while in a stomping frenzie we didnt pay any attentation as to where we ended up
Malcomb Danitz chuckles "falll in?"

Snapper Hollak sigh's " well we had stomped our way into the Trevan right in a back room " you know there's a big round thing in there with water in it and a strange panting on the wall , I asked Lady red what that tub thing was when Ashaka appeared in the door way and I saw another one of those bug things scurrying out and I yelled " Whats that and thats when Ashaka knocked me out
Malcomb Danitz: Knocked you out - in the paga den?!?
SnapperHollak cringes holding her head trying to nod ' yes
Malcomb Danitz stands as if stunned, obvoiously thinking

Snapper Hollak looks over to Kati

Katia Gandt lowers her eyes. worried that her friend has crossed the line..
Malcomb Danitz seems more tyhan angry. He stands still, unable to decide what to do. hand clech and unclench.

Katia Gandt remains quiet ... knowing that Mal will never accept me interfering ..

Malcomb Danitz: "Snapper" Looks at her with a darkened expression "damn you. I never wanted to have to do this, but you simply must accept your limits. "

Katia Gandt: bk .. praying for you !!))
Snapper Hollak looks at Kati swollering softly

Katia Gandt staring at her friend.. ....
Katia Gandt: "You are so reckless with your life, Snapper. "
Malcomb Danitz: "Snapper, as your protector, acting as your brother, you have tested me once too often." he advances to her and takes her hands gently in his own. "I thhink you need to understand how seriously i take my dutioes to yuo, Lady."
Snapper Hollak looks to kati letting her know not to worry " but I didnt relize where I had gotten myself

Katia Gandt remembering too well what he had told her earlier ..
Snapper Hollak looks down as Malcomb takes her hands in his looking up she swollars softly nodding her head

Malcomb Danitz: "Snapper, as a free woman, you must be more aware of such things." he ties her wrists together "this binding is symbolic. I will not be collaring yuo - this time" he looks at her seriously " but you must take this lesson to heart." binding her wrist together , her fashions a leash out of a small length of rope.
Katia Gandt knowing how hard this is for all.. she lowers her eyes.. and walks out of the room.. moving to the square ...

Katia Gandt: /my eyes looking directly at him... " I am going downstairs. Mal "
Malcomb Danitz looks eriously at her "Come my friends and sister, this will be difficult, but wont last long."
Tali Ceriano tilts her head, paying close attention to what the man was saying, "But how does one know if one loses or wins?"
Adrionna Danick gasps seeing Snaps bound.
Frost Danick looked to Malcomb, his hand begining to flex. "Whats the meaning of this Malcomb.
Tali Ceriano: "Oh Tal, Lady Katia," she says with a friendly smiles. I did not see you arrive."
Katia Gandt raises her eyes to see her love .. followed by her friend, bound...
Trenzos Dyrssen arched an eyebrow. "Well, does it really matter?" he looked at Tali carefully. "After all, it's not about that, it comes down to the artform of the movement of the pieces. Does that comfort you?" However he paused when he noticed Malbomb arrive with Snapper in tow, seemingly bound. "I dare say, now that'll be on the Tribune."
Fey Farlight turns seeing her friend she had been worried about and now seeing her bound.
Tali Ceriano: "Hmmm, yes, I see, Sir," she then followed his gaze and looked upon a scene before her that made her eyes widen
Malcomb Danitz strides purposely fully into the clearing near the square, his jaw set, his face impassive, yet unusually intense. "Lady Snapper, you have embarrassed yourself. You have embarrassed me, your protector, by entering a paga den,a nd allowing yourself to be caught there. Repeatedly you have behaved inappropriately." He produces a slave whip from his belt, and lets the five blades flip and twirl.
Adrionna Danick eyes widen
Frost Danick eyes darken.
Katia Gandt forcing herself to watch. knowing that this punishment is for her own good.. going to save her life one day ...
Fey Farlight takes a deep breath she looks to Onna then back to the men and to snapper.
Tali Ceriano pushes herself up straight, spine stiffening, as she hears the words he has spoken about the Lady and watches in almost sheer terror as she sees a slave whip in his hand
Trenzos Dyrssen stroked his chin, looking intently now.
Adrionna Danick: Fey come back here....


Adrionna Danick: Fey....
Adrionna Danick: Step back dear
Fey Farlight looks over at Onna she was caught by suprise but steped over to her more out of need to be near someone she trusted her eyes not leaving hte whip
Malcomb Danitz: "I allow you now to undress your self, rather than be force ably stripped." he releases her hands, symbolically tied until now. "and assume the position karta.
Frost Danick began to spit out curses in Kurii as he watched and waited to see what happened.

Malcomb Danitz: .unleash
Katia Gandt trembling with fear.. remembering well...

Adrionna Danick gasps again

Katia Gandt watching the faces of all.. looking from one and then the other..
 Malcomb Danitz starts to unbind Snapper Hollak


Fey Farlight fiddles with her cloak holding her breath some she looked away out of respect for her friend her face begain to pale knowing that was comming.
Frost Danick flexed his hand out wide as he watched.
Snapper Hollak looks at no one she focuses on the newly put Statues near the Admin building reaching up she begings to unbutton her dress top getting to the last button she lets it fall off her shoulders and to the ground , reaching for the hem of her modiesty top she pulls it over her head and lets it fall to the ground where it lays with her top
Tali Ceriano covers her face with gloved hands, she cannot watch this ... she is visibly shaking, knowing she could never be guilty of such a thing ... but yet, what if she were? 'No no!', she cried to herself. It would be impossible
Snapper Hollak with her head held high reachs
Adrionna Danick gasps
Katia Gandt knowing the truth... understanding... trusting...
Malcomb Danitz watches he without enjoyment. This duty is solemn, if distasteful, and he only hopes it will save her from more such humiliation.
Malcomb Danitz looks to the crowd, expecting no lewd comments, and understanding, Seeing the people he knows he will not need to worry, as they understand.
Frost Danick didn't look at snapper at all, his eyes locked on Malcomb, waiting. Stipping the woman was humiliation in itself.
Snapper Hollak: around and undoes her skirt letting it fall from around her waist over her hips and to the ground she steps forward walking out of it , reaching down she unbuckles her boots and shakes them off one at a time , the sighs around her not detering her from what she was asked to do
Trenzos Dyrssen shook his head and then turned away, his sandals slapping against the wooden boards.

Katia Gandt holding her hands together tightly.. a tear falls ..for her ... and for him.. knowing his heart ..

Fey Farlight reached out fo r Onna's arm first the slave falling to her death and now this her hands shook as she looked on.
Adrionna Danick whispers, "Calm down Fey."
JamesP Bluebird watches the scene unfold as he whispers to the group "what is happening?"
Frost Danick controlled his breathing, his body now physically shaking. Knowing in this current state, any man here would be free to collar Snapper. If they got through him first.


Malcomb Danitz looks to the crowd "I claim right of punishmetn on this, Lady, as her protector. But she remains free and my blade up holds that." he moves to stand over her. "10 lashes."

Malcomb Danitz delivers the first strike with force, Her pain is to be a reminder. his strike intended to leave a mark on her back that will linger for days.
Malcomb Danitz strikes again, along her bacl a welt appears.
Fey Farlight nods not really hearing Onna but her eyes locked on the whip she jumped as the first whip crack
Tali Ceriano lets her fingers slide from her face, taking several shallow breaths she once again takes in the sight of the Lady being stripped, about to be whipped publicly ... she had never witnessed this before and knew she would never be the same again
Malcomb Danitz: backhanded her laysinto her, letting soem of his anger appear for the first time.
Frost Danick his eye twicted as the first blow was delivered hie eyes still locked on malcomb as if burning a hole through the man.
Malcomb Danitz: again a strike, harder than the others.
Malcomb Danitz: "learn from this, my sister."
Snapper Hollak cringes as the first strike is set upon her skin " she didnt scream out or let a sound leave her mouth " tears rolled down her face yet no one heard a sound from her
Frost Danick a growl began to reasonate from his throat seeing the anger in mal coming out.
Malcomb Danitz: the strike lays on her back across the others, and a hatch work appears now a ntwork of welts.

Malcomb Danitz: Do NOt embarass me again, Lady.

Payton999 Robonaught slipped quietly up and onto the grass, her eyes widened, but she remained as silent as she possibly could as she watched whatever it was that was going on beyond. Her head shook as she caught the lash of the whips crack in the air. A gasp escaped as she saw a woman on the ground, she figured it was one who was familiar enough to her. "Sir!" she exclaimed loudly, blinking. Letting out a deep sigh she growled, "Surely you could do this in the privacy of your own home for priest kings..", she paused and drew in a deep breath with the intent on calming herself and turned and stormed away.
Fey Farlight shook more her face becomming absent of color watching the anger of the man and taking it out on her friend she holds her breath .
Malcomb Danitz: Finally the alst stoke lands, with a vigour unmatched by the previous.
Frost Danick looked to payton, his eyes still holding the intensity of his gaze on mal, his jaw now truly set and his body shaking, knowing that what she had said was blatanly true. And this was humiliation.

Malcomb Danitz stand back from her. "Claim your clothes Snapper, and go to your room and dress. But you will leave this area as you are." This matter is at an end.
Snapper Hollak each time the whip touched her skin she cringed yet she would not scream out in pain biteing her lip she let the tears roll down her cheecks and on to the green grass to her there was no one around her she would never let anyone see she hurt
Adrionna Danick escorts her
Adrionna Danick: Come Snapper
Frost Danick shouts: Bastard! " He spat at the man in Kurii, before heading to thewarriors hall, kicking the door open and causing it to slamm shut with a loud crak.
Malcomb Danitz plaes his whip in its spopt on his belt, hard to see, but easy to reach. and he folds his arms wwhile watching her.
Tali Ceriano can do nothing, can barely move, her heart is pounding so hard and fast, adrenaline coursing through her body
Katia Gandt rises gracefully... and walks slowly to his side.
Adrionna Danick: Come Snaps, let's go.
Malcomb Danitz looks at Snapper with sympathetic, yet angry eyes. "next time it will be a post , with a collar, lady."
Frost Danick: Adrionna, make sure no one touches her.
Adrionna Danick: Aye Frost
Malcomb Danitz: Nop omne will touch her, or they will feel my blade.
Frost Danick whispers: Anyone that does... "He looked around the group, his eyes glowing with rage. "
Adrionna Danick: Nods to Mal
Frost Danick: Weill face my blade.
Katia Gandt gives Snapper a wrap... ...
Snapper Hollak reaches down picking up her cloths not looking at anyone gathering in her arms she holds her head high the pain from being knocked out plus the whelps from the whip hurt to no end but she would not let on in public nodding her head she turned on the balls of her naked feet and walked toward her rooom on weak knees
Malcomb Danitz: "this matter is closed."
Payton999 Robonaught's head was still shaking as she took her few steps back to the grass once more. She wasn't sure why she had felt need to say a word, not being the one whipped herself, an lashes were the last thing which caused any part of her to wince or be skiddish. She scrunched her eyes tightly closed and opened them again quickly, noting everyone was indeed still there. With a shrug of her shoulders she brushed the whole scene off and skipped a few steps to the left, plopping down horribly unceremoniously to the back ledge of the platform, sure no one would notice.
Snapper Hollak smiles at Kati feeling the wrap go around her shoulders
Frost Danick: And you brother. "He looked Malcomb dead in the eye. "As her fellow protector have completely humiliated her. This could have been done in private."
Katia Gandt smiles.. tears falling...
Fey Farlight stepped forward to help Onna and Snapper her body was shaking.


Adrionna Danick walks to the sink and washes her hands well
Adrionna Danick takes the jar of healing salve laced with kanda from her pocket and applies it to the lashes
Snapper Hollak weakly walks to her bed laying down on her belly she burys her face in her furs exploding with all the hurt and pain , her body shock from convugltions
Adrionna Danick: Carefully traces each lash mark one by one
Adrionna Danick: not rubbing the flesh simply letting the gel coat each one on the cool remedy.
Snapper Hollak cringes each time the salve is applied to the whelps on her body
Snapper Hollak weakly reaches for the jar and puts it on her bed beside her

Snapper Hollak turning her head just far enough for to see Onna " weakley she smiles at Onna , thank you
Adrionna Danick: This will remove the pain for 24 ahn at a time dear
Adrionna Danick: this time tomorrow it should be reapplied
Adrionna Danick: and the day after you should be healed up beautifully without mark
Snapper Hollak nods her head " who would I get to applie it
Adrionna Danick: I shall do it myself
Adrionna Danick: No one will see you this way
Adrionna Danick: I wont have it
Adrionna Danick: I will return this time tomorrow.
Adrionna Danick: And no one is to see you this way. With the Kanda, your clothing will not cause pain either
Adrionna Danick: But, you must stop behaving as a man.
Snapper Hollak nods her head " thank you Onna " feeling sleepy " I guess this was better then letting the Mageriste handle the situation
Adrionna Danick: Bugs or not you should not have gone into the Tavern dear.
Snapper Hollak " But truely I wasnt trying to be like a man , honestly Onna ,
Adrionna Danick: I will let you rest now I am a bit faint from all of the going ons today.
Adrionna Danick: It has been one after another
Adrionna Danick: I had to punish Gron's girl today
Snapper Hollak wealkly " I just didnt pay attention as to where I ended up
Adrionna Danick: He wont be plesed with her.
Snapper Hollak nods " ah I heard
Adrionna Danick: Well, I trust you will be more mindful from now on.
Adrionna Danick: Now rest dear.
Adrionna Danick: I will return tomorrow.
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« 04. August 2010, 12:30:25 »
OOoooh darn well I was going to say we got away with it..well i did..snickers...I guess I have to find another playmate for trouble if your going to get a collaring next time..sighs and walks back in to her dusky old classroom making a note to play spot the bitten slave asses by hintis next time she goes out!!!

I guess I owe you a drink Snapper after dragging you in to that!

Red x
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« 04. August 2010, 12:47:57 »
OOoooh darn well I was going to say we got away with it..well i did..snickers...I guess I have to find another playmate for trouble if your going to get a collaring next time..sighs and walks back in to her dusky old classroom making a note to play spot the bitten slave asses by hintis next time she goes out!!!

I guess I owe you a drink Snapper after dragging you in to that!

Red x

Lady red I here there is a tall warrior looking for you he said that he is your brother and he looked mad and mean

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« 04. August 2010, 12:51:59 »
Very intense and well done to all , I hope Snaps will behave from now on !!
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« 04. August 2010, 15:11:07 »
 Wink Lady Red we just Snapper up and DONT GET CAUGHT next time , teheehhehh  Grin
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« 04. August 2010, 20:14:50 »
Sooo glad I was busy and stayed on the boat lolol xx

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« 04. August 2010, 21:01:32 »
Lady Red grins at Lady Isabella..yes you had a close call there for joining in..and Lady Snapper, I think we create a brand...saying..youv'e been snappered..it will be all the rage in Gor!

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« 04. August 2010, 21:05:43 »
theheh maybe we should make signs ' YOU"VE BEEN SNAPPERED!!!" teheheehheehehe
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« 05. August 2010, 10:13:19 »
lol I think it was fun though and a high mighty Fw insanely jealous of slaves, well yeah I can see them doing what Red and Snapper did.. was good rp! poor Snappers  Embarrassed people like us are soo misunderstood!
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« 05. August 2010, 10:35:45 »
 Cry I know lina ,theehehe it was fun rp very much fun
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